Actually pretty well animated, unlike a lot of similar movies nowadays. Darn shame its so short, though.

Keep practicing, and I'm sure you'll do great.

Where's the poyo, darnit?!

(+) Smooth animation and perfect 'oldschool' lipsyncing.
(+) Excellent use of the misheard lyrics.
(+) Well-timed captions and no text artifacts/leaks.
(+) Caption button is well-done and doesn't break at all.
(+) TEH EDN! Ancient references like that are worth a free point.
(-) Voice quality is pretty bad on the ending segment, but eh, its just something to keep in mind about. I'm not gonna lie - it sounds old. Maybe it does have a certain 00s charm to it.

Final score: 4.7.
Overall 5 out of 5. GG, looking forward to see more!

Now this, this is good.

So, review time. Lets took at the good stuff...
+ KILL LA KILL. 'nuff said. You know what you're doing - making hentai of popera anime is always a good formula.
+ Quality voice sampling, very good use of lines.
+ Her hat had my sides in orbit. You get an extra star just for that.

... and for the bad stuff.
- This flash is around 21Mb. You could use a bit of quantum compression and cleanup.
- Compared to a 21Mb file, the animations on this are still somewhat jerky. Improvements from the demo, yes - but still jerky. A real offender would be BJ#2. I recommend you research up on "easing" in animations.
- Not enough voicing; just a few samples and repetitive moans. You should 'research' your character a bit more during your auditions.

Overall 4.0 stars, including effort.
Do better next time, alright? I'm looking forward to more of your releases.

Junk. Junk. Shovelware. Adpile. Junk. Doesn't load properly. Ju-

Wha-hey! That's pretty good!
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+Easy to listen music
++ Responsive controls
++ Really interesting game concept

- Some animations are off, and there's no clear indication of whether you succeeded or not.
- Music does not loop, facilitating the need to end the level.

Overall - 4.5 stars. Nice work!

You wanted a review, right? Here's a review.

Good stuff
No audio clipping. This right here is a great way to get positive points. So many musicians here forget this one single step.(++)
Balanced through the play, doesn't make me want to skip, aka ACTUALLY LISTENABLE. (++)
Nice beat, follows the theme well (+)

Not so good stuff
The middle part is slightly bland while the start and the end has optimal variance. (-)

Overall, I think this track deserves a 5/5 score. See this? This is how you get a 5-star score.

Aside from a little repetitiveness here and there, you're doin' great. Don't worry - you've got some good pacing skills. Don't let early installment weirdness put you off making music. Do your best as always!

It's pretty soothing and comfy. Nice job!

#12: Start a war with the puchuus again.

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I see you're expanding your horizons. Where'll the crew travel to next?

I just have one question...

.... what happened to the toaster?

"And this seemingly isolated incident was the beginning of Potatoman's slow, but sure spiral into the dark side..."

... eh? Not halloween yet? Darnit.