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... hey, not bad!

You could have added a preloader, though.

But hey, why am I complaining. This is pretty good! Keep up the good work, allright?

Animation was really choppy. You should have tried to make a flipbook animation.
The sound quality was very good, though.
Keep on improving your works, allright?

Kenji195 responds:

I keep thinking about a flipbook animations too, but I have bad camera so :P
But thanks a lot for reviewing, makes me happy so much :D

Maybe you should learn how to tween things instead of frame-by-frame animations. I could make something like this in 30 minutes.

rash12 responds:

Yeah I get that,I'm a noob really... haha.

Constructive criticism, you say? Allright.

Pros
++ Custom spriting. Everyone loves custom spriting.
+ The music was not annoying. This is important.
+ Environment damage. You could have done better, but you did well for your first flash.

Cons
- Reused dialog. It gets boring. Don't use it.
- Walking animation does not fit a 'dodge move'.
-- You need to enhance your VFX skills. Those static images looked lazy.

Well done. I look forward to you movies as you improve your skills.

The voice acting seems a bit stiff at points, but you've got a great idea going on here.

But overall, you've done some good stuff.

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I got all that.

RubberDildo responds:

I'm glad one of us did.

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