Animation was really choppy. You should have tried to make a flipbook animation.
The sound quality was very good, though.
Keep on improving your works, allright?
Animation was really choppy. You should have tried to make a flipbook animation.
The sound quality was very good, though.
Keep on improving your works, allright?
I keep thinking about a flipbook animations too, but I have bad camera so :P
But thanks a lot for reviewing, makes me happy so much :D
Maybe you should learn how to tween things instead of frame-by-frame animations. I could make something like this in 30 minutes.
Yeah I get that,I'm a noob really... haha.
Constructive criticism, you say? Allright.
Pros
++ Custom spriting. Everyone loves custom spriting.
+ The music was not annoying. This is important.
+ Environment damage. You could have done better, but you did well for your first flash.
Cons
- Reused dialog. It gets boring. Don't use it.
- Walking animation does not fit a 'dodge move'.
-- You need to enhance your VFX skills. Those static images looked lazy.
Well done. I look forward to you movies as you improve your skills.
The voice acting seems a bit stiff at points, but you've got a great idea going on here.
But overall, you've done some good stuff.
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I got all that.
I'm glad one of us did.
Its not quite as well done as stuff before - but eh, don't worry. This is your thing. You do what you damn well please.
Looking forward to moar stuff from ya.
Ssssssuperb. The animation is smooth, well-timed and the voice acting feels natural.
This is how a practice animation should be done.
Thanks master QwQ
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